Harry is a mountain has its downsides but always has an up side
Harry is a mystery box you can see what's on the outside but what’s inside is unpredictable
Harry is a book you can see the cover but to truly understand you need to flip thru the pages to understand
Harry is a tamed lion scary on the outside and nice on the inside
Harry is a mystery box you can see what's on the outside but what’s inside is unpredictable
Harry is a book you can see the cover but to truly understand you need to flip thru the pages to understand
Harry is a tamed lion scary on the outside and nice on the inside
Hi there Harry, my name is Bilal and I am from Waitemata at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like how you have used amazing metaphors that are describing you. It reminded me of me doing my metaphors in my class where we had to describe a picture that the teacher had put up. have you thought about adding punctuation. If you want to check out my blog here is the link to it.
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ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is Ishaan and I am a student in Waitemata at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like how you used metaphors about yourself. It made me think of when we used similes, metaphors and personification. Have you thought about explaining your metaphors better? If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpsIshaang. blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteIshaanG Thank you for pointing out how I can make this better I will try to remember for if I do something like this
DeleteKia ora Harry, my name is Tia and I am a year 6 at Paihia School. I really like your blog post about metaphors. My favourite metaphor was:
ReplyDeleteHarry is a mountain, has its downsides but always has an up side. That was awesome. I also like the way you set out your metaphors so they were easy to read. Keep up the great work!
Yours sincerely,
Tia